Chicopee Public Schools
Writing Process Handbook
Grade 4 Instructional Guidelines
The primary focus of writing in Grade 4 is to refine and master all steps of the writing process. The production of clear, organized five paragraph essays across the curriculum is encouraged. Typical students entering Grade 4 have participated in all steps of the writing process and have written a five paragraph essay. They should have a clear understanding of topic and paragraph development; and they are developing a degree of independence in editing and revising their writing. By the end of Grade 4 students are expected to independently complete a well-developed five paragraph personal narrative using the writing process. Students at this level should become more independent with self-editing and revising. They should begin to demonstrate purposefulness and variety in their choice of supporting details and sentence structures. Vocabulary should be precise with examples of sensory words and figurative language. All sentences in the essay should remain on topic. In addition to personal narrative, grade 4 students should have ample opportunities to write in a variety of text structures including narrative story, comparative essay and persuasive essay.
Writing instruction models vary from building to building and teacher to teacher. Some teachers may prefer to teach writing daily within the ELA block, while others may wish to follow the model provided in the basal reader. In Grade 4, writing instruction should take place on a daily basis in a number of different venues, such as journal writing, a formal response to a prompt, or a longer published piece to name a few. Teachers have the option of teaching writing within the language arts block or scheduling a Writer’s Workshop. The writing process can be taught as whole class lessons enabling student to benefit from techniques modeled by the teacher and other students. Teacher’s creativity and enthusiasm about writing is an important tool to develop students’ skills as authentic lifelong writers. Teachers use different methods and materials to teach writing, but it is important to note that informal and formal writing experiences should be integrated throughout the content areas.
Instructional challenges:
· Writing Challenges:
o Making the transition to writing a longer more detailed essay
o Developing independence in all steps of the writing process
o Developing purposefulness in choice of supporting details
o Developing purposefulness in word choice and sentence structure.
o Using precise words, phrases, and transitions
· Differentiated instruction based on students’ different ability levels
· Students different levels of prior knowledge, specifically in the content areas
· Time management
· Classroom Management
Suggested resources:
· Building level support staff
· On-site staff trained in the Chicopee Public Schools Writing Process
· Chicopee Public School Writing Handbook
· Writing Process Resource Book
· Write Source Teacher Resources
Document A
Chicopee Public Schools Grade 4 Writing Scope & Sequence Full Year
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Grade |
Standard |
Text Structure |
Prewriting Strategies |
Revising Skills |
Revising Tools |
Editing Skills |
Editing Tools |
Publishing |
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Full Year |
Respond to a Prompt
5 Paragraph Essay; Introduction 3 Supporting Paragraphs & Conclusion
(Paragraphs to be a Minimum of 5 Sentences and 3 Supporting Details)
Main Idea is Well Developed with Supporting Evidence
All Sentences on Topic
Evidence of Voice/Writers Purpose |
Journal Response with Evidence of Voice
Open Response Essay with Supporting Evidence
Descriptive Paragraph
Summary/ Paraphrasing Paragraph
Personal Narrative
Narrative Story: Plot, Character, Setting
Expository Writing: Informational, Comparative, Problem/Solution
Persuasive Essay: With Goals & Reasons
Friendly Letter (Review)
Poetry – Simple Sense of Detail
Research Report |
Sense of Audience
Discussion
Brainstorming List
Quick Writes
Webbing
Story Map
Sequence Chart
Time Line
Venn Diagram
KWL Chart
Graphic Organizers: Main Idea & Details
Outline: Topic/Subtopic/ Fact/Details |
Interesting Opening Introductory Phrases
Precise Word Choice
Descriptive/Sensory Words
Figurative Language: Simile, Alliteration
Add Supporting Details
Add Variety of Examples
Sentence Variety
Combine Sentences Use of Introductory Phrases
Change Sentence Order
Delete Repetitions & Off-Topic Sentences
Order Information
Add Dialogue
Precise Transitions |
Read Aloud to Self
Author’s Chair
Peer Revising (Individual or Group)
Revising Checklist
Word Lists
Thesaurus
Teacher Conference |
Capitals
End Marks
Commas (Dates, Series, Phrases, Appositives)
Quotation Marks
Apostrophe
Subject/Verb Agreement
Sentence Structure (Fragments & Run On Sentences)
Correct Use of: Possessives Pronoun Reference Adjectives/Adverbs Verbs-Tense & Irregular |
Personal Word Lists
Editing Checklists
Peer Editing
Proofreading Marks
Colored Pencils
Have a Go Spelling
Resident Expert: Spelling, Capitals, Punctuation, Grammar
Dictionary/ Thesaurus |
Journal Entry
Essay
Typed Format
Book Format
Share/Read Aloud
Illustration
Diorama
Letter
Oral Report
Anthology
Magazine Article
New Article |
Document A
| Chicopee Public Schools | Grade 4 Writing Scope & Sequence | By Terms | ||||||
| Grade | Standard | Text Structures | Prewriting Strategies | Revising Skills | Revising Tools | Editing Skills | Editing Tools | Publishing |
| First | Respond to a Prompt | Journal Response | Sense of Audience | Interesting Opening | Read Aloud to Self | Capitals | Personal Word Lists | Journal Entry |
| Term | Journal Response | with Voice | Discussion | Precise Word Choice | Author's Chair | End Marks | Editing Checklists | Essay |
| with Voice | Descriptive Paragraph | Brainstorming List | Descriptive/Sensory Words | Peer Revising | Quotation Marks | Peer Editing | Typed Format | |
| 5 Paragraphs Essay: | Personal Narrative | Quick Writes | Combine Sentences | (Individual or Group) | Apostrophe | Proofreading Marks | Book Format | |
| Introduction, 3 | Open Response Essay | Webbing | Add Supporting Details | Revising Checklist | Sentence Structure | Colored Pencils | Share/ Read Aloud | |
| support paragraphs | with Supporting Evidence | Story Map | Add Variety of Examples | Word Lists | (Fragments & | Have a Go Spelling | Illustration | |
| & Conclusion | Friendly Letter (Review) | Sequence Chart | Delete Repetitions & | Thesaurus | Run On Sentences) | Resident Expert | Diorama | |
| (Paragraphs to be | Time Line | Off-Topic Sentences | Teacher Conference | (Spelling, Capitals, | Letter | |||
| a Minimum of 5 | Venn Diagram | Precise Transitions | Punctuation, | Oral Report | ||||
| Sentences and 3 | KWL Chart | Grammar) | Anthology | |||||
| Supporting Details) | Graphic Organizers - | Dictionary/Thesaurus | Magazine Article | |||||
| Main Idea is Well | Main Idea & Detail | News Article | ||||||
| Developed with | ||||||||
| Supporting Evidence | ||||||||
| All Sentences on | ||||||||
| Topic | ||||||||
| Evidence of Voice/ | ||||||||
| Writers Purpose | ||||||||
| Second | Respond to a Prompt | Open Response Essay | Sense of Audience | Interesting Opening | Read Aloud to Self | Capitals | Personal Word Lists | Journal Entry |
| Term | Journal Response | with Supporting Evidence | Discussion | Introductory Phrases | Author's Chair | End Marks | Editing Checklists | Essay |
| with Voice | Summary/Paraphrasing | Brainstorming List | Precise Word Choice | Peer Revising | Commas (Dates, | Peer Editing | Typed Format | |
| 5 Paragraphs Essay: | Paragraph | Quick Writes | Descriptive/Sensory Words | (Individual or Group) | Series, Phrases, | Proofreading Marks | Book Format | |
| Introduction, 3 | Narrative Story - Plot | Webbing | Figurative Language - | Revising Checklist | Appositives) | Colored Pencils | Share/ Read Aloud | |
| support paragraphs | Character, Setting | Story Map | simile, alliteration | Word Lists | Quotation Marks | Have a Go Spelling | Illustration | |
| & Conclusion | Expository Writing - | Sequence Chart | Add Supporting Details | Thesaurus | Apostrophe | Resident Expert | Diorama | |
| (Paragraphs to be | Comparative | Time Line | Add Variety of Examples | Teacher Conference | Subject /Verb Agree | (Spelling, Capitals, | Letter | |
| a Minimum of 5 | Poetry - Simple sense of detail | Venn Diagram | Sentence Variety | Sentence Structure | Punctuation, | Oral Report | ||
| Sentences and 3 | Persuasive Essay - | KWL Chart | Combine Sentences | (Fragments & | Grammar) | Anthology | ||
| Supporting Details) | with Goals/Reasons | Graphic Organizers - | Change Sentence Order | Run On Sentences) | Dictionary/Thesaurus | Magazine Article | ||
| Main Idea is Well | Main Idea & Detail | Delete Repetitions & | Correct Use of: | News Article | ||||
| Developed with | Outline- | Off-Topic Sentences | Possessives | |||||
| Supporting Evidence | (Topic/Subtopic/Fact/ | Order Information | Verbs -Tense & Irregular | |||||
| All Sentences on | Detail) | Add Dialogue | ||||||
| Topic | Precise Transitions | |||||||
| Evidence of Voice/ | ||||||||
| Writers Purpose | ||||||||
| Third | Respond to a Prompt | Expository Writing - | Sense of Audience | Interesting Opening | Read Aloud to Self | Capitals | Personal Word Lists | Journal Entry |
| Term | Journal Response | Informational, | Discussion | Introductory Phrases | Author's Chair | End Marks | Editing Checklists | Essay |
| with Voice | Problem/Solution | Brainstorming List | Precise Word Choice | Peer Revising | Commas (Dates, | Peer Editing | Typed Format | |
| 5 Paragraphs Essay: | Research Report | Quick Writes | Descriptive/Sensory Words | (Individual or Group) | Series, Phrases, | Proofreading Marks | Book Format | |
| Introduction, 3 | Webbing | Figurative Language - | Revising Checklist | Appositives) | Colored Pencils | Share/ Read Aloud | ||
| support paragraphs | Story Map | simile, alliteration | Word Lists | Quotation Marks | Have a Go Spelling | Illustration | ||
| & Conclusion | Sequence Chart | Add Supporting Details | Thesaurus | Apostrophe | Resident Expert | Diorama | ||
| (Paragraphs to be | Time Line | Add Variety of Examples | Teacher Conference | Subject /Verb Agree | (Spelling, Capitals, | Letter | ||
| a Minimum of 5 | Venn Diagram | Sentence Variety | Sentence Structure | Punctuation, | Oral Report | |||
| Sentences and 3 | KWL Chart | Combine Sentences - | (Fragments & | Grammar) | Anthology | |||
| Supporting Details) | Graphic Organizers - | Use of Introductory | Run On Sentences) | Dictionary/Thesaurus | Magazine Article | |||
| Main Idea is Well | Main Idea & Detail | Phrases | Correct Use of: | News Article | ||||
| Developed with | Outline- | Change Sentence Order | Possessives | |||||
| Supporting Evidence | (Topic/Subtopic/Fact/ | Delete Repetitions & | Pronoun Reference | |||||
| All Sentences on | Detail) | Off-Topic Sentences | Adjectives & Adverbs | |||||
| Topic | Order Information | Verbs -Tense & Irregular | ||||||
| Evidence of Voice/ | Add Dialogue | |||||||
| Writers Purpose | Precise Transitions | |||||||
Chicopee Public Schools
Grade 4 Writing Rubric
Document B
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Elements of Writing |
Topic Development |
Organization |
Sentence Structure |
Vocabulary |
Conventions Grammar/Mechanics |
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* Exemplary
4
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□ Topic is creatively stated □ Well-developed and thoughtful paragraphs enhance topic □ Wide variety of supporting details with examples |
□ Purposeful use of paragraphing □ Complex organizational structure □ Sophisticated use of transitions enhances writer’s purpose |
□ Sentence structure contributes to voice and tone □ Sentences are purposefully chosen for effect |
□ Thoughtful word choice enhances writer’s purpose □ Creative use of sensory words and/or figurative language contributes to voice or tone |
□ Use of conventions enhances writer’s purpose □ Spelling errors show evidence of risk-taking □ Sophisticated use of tense |
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* Exemplary writing must represent independent writing. All standards for proficient writing must be met in addition to the exemplary standards. |
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Proficient
3
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□ Topic is clearly stated and well developed □ All sentences are on topic □ Adequate number and choice of details support the topic
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□ Five paragraphs with precise and engaging introduction, body and conclusion □ Ideas are logical and sequential □ Individual paragraphs are well organized to convey writer’s purpose □ Precise use of transitions |
□ Evidence of compound and/or complex sentences □ Sentences vary in type and length
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□ Precise and varied word choice supports writer’s purpose □ Effective use of sensory words and figurative language
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□ Correct use of capitalization and punctuation □ Grade level words are spelled correctly □ Correct use of subject/verb agreement and verb tenses □ Correct pronoun reference, plurals and possessives |
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Developing
2
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□ Topic is not clearly stated and/or well developed □ Most sentences are on topic □ Limited number of details to support topic
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□ Unclear or incomplete introduction, body, and conclusion □ Some ideas are logical and sequential □ Individual paragraphs do not effectively convey writer’s purpose □ Limited use of transitions |
□ Limited use of compound and/or complex sentences □ Lacks sentence variety |
□ Some variety of word choice □ Word choice does not adequately support topic □ Occasional use of sensory words and/or figurative language |
□ Some errors in capitalization and punctuation □ Occasional errors in spelling grade level words □ Inconsistent use of subject/verb agreement and verb tense □ Inconsistent use of pronoun reference, plurals and possessives |
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Beginning
1
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□ Topic is not stated and/or developed □ Few sentences are on topic □ Inadequate number of details and examples to support topic |
□ Inadequate introduction, body, and conclusion □ Ideas are not logical or sequential □ Writer’s purpose is unclear |
□ No sentence variety □ Uses incomplete and/or run on sentences |
□ Basic and/or repetitive word choice □ Word choice does not support topic □ Lacks use of sensory words and/or figurative language |
□ Numerous errors in capitalization, punctuation □ Spelling errors interfere with meaning □ Frequent errors using parts of speech |
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□ Writing Sample Not Scored - Off Topic, Illegible or Blank Please explain in comment section |
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