Chicopee Public Schools

Writing Process Handbook

Grade 4 Instructional Guidelines

 

The primary focus of writing in Grade 4 is to refine and master all steps of the writing process. The production of clear, organized five paragraph essays across the curriculum is encouraged.  Typical students entering Grade 4 have participated in all steps of the writing process and have written a five paragraph essay. They should have a clear understanding of topic and paragraph development; and they are developing a degree of independence in editing and revising their writing.  By the end of Grade 4 students are expected to independently complete a well-developed five paragraph personal narrative using the writing process. Students at this level should become more independent with self-editing and revising. They should begin to demonstrate purposefulness and variety in their choice of supporting details and sentence structures.  Vocabulary should be precise with examples of sensory words and figurative language. All sentences in the essay should remain on topic.  In addition to personal narrative, grade 4 students should have ample opportunities to write in a variety of text structures including narrative story, comparative essay and persuasive essay.

 

 

Writing instruction models vary from building to building and teacher to teacher.  Some teachers may prefer to teach writing daily within the ELA block, while others may wish to follow the model provided in the basal reader.  In Grade 4, writing instruction should take place on a daily basis in a number of different venues, such as journal writing, a formal response to a prompt, or a longer published piece to name a few.  Teachers have the option of teaching writing within the language arts block or scheduling a Writer’s Workshop.  The writing process can be taught as whole class lessons enabling student to benefit from techniques modeled by the teacher and other students.  Teacher’s creativity and enthusiasm about writing is an important tool to develop students’ skills as authentic lifelong writers.  Teachers use different methods and materials to teach writing, but it is important to note that informal and formal writing experiences should be integrated throughout the content areas. 

 

 

Instructional challenges:

·         Writing Challenges:

o   Making the transition to writing a longer more detailed essay

o   Developing independence in all steps of the writing process

o   Developing purposefulness in choice of supporting details

o   Developing purposefulness in word choice and sentence structure.

o   Using precise words, phrases, and transitions

·         Differentiated instruction based on students’ different ability levels

·         Students different levels of prior knowledge, specifically in the content areas

·         Time management

·         Classroom Management

 

Suggested resources:

·         Building level support staff

·         On-site staff trained in the Chicopee Public Schools Writing Process

·         Chicopee Public School Writing Handbook

·         Writing Process Resource Book

·         Write Source Teacher Resources     

 

  

Document A

 

 

Chicopee Public Schools                        Grade 4 Writing Scope & Sequence                                 Full Year

 

Grade

Standard

Text Structure

Prewriting Strategies

Revising Skills

Revising

Tools

Editing Skills

Editing Tools

Publishing

 

Full Year

 

Respond to a Prompt

 

5 Paragraph Essay;

Introduction

3 Supporting Paragraphs & Conclusion

 

(Paragraphs to be a Minimum of 5 Sentences and 3 Supporting Details)

 

Main Idea is Well Developed with Supporting Evidence

 

 

All Sentences on Topic

 

Evidence of Voice/Writers Purpose

 

Journal Response with Evidence of Voice

 

Open Response Essay with Supporting Evidence

 

Descriptive Paragraph

 

Summary/

Paraphrasing Paragraph

 

Personal Narrative

 

Narrative Story:

Plot, Character, Setting

 

Expository Writing:

Informational, Comparative,

Problem/Solution

 

Persuasive Essay:

With Goals & Reasons

 

Friendly Letter (Review)

 

Poetry – Simple Sense of Detail

 

Research Report

 

Sense of Audience

 

Discussion

 

Brainstorming List

 

Quick Writes

 

Webbing

 

Story Map

 

Sequence Chart

 

Time Line

 

Venn Diagram

 

KWL Chart

 

Graphic Organizers:

Main Idea & Details

 

Outline:

Topic/Subtopic/

Fact/Details

 

Interesting Opening

  Introductory Phrases

 

Precise Word Choice

 

Descriptive/Sensory Words

 

Figurative Language:

Simile, Alliteration

 

Add Supporting Details

 

Add Variety of Examples

 

Sentence Variety

 

Combine Sentences

Use of Introductory Phrases

 

Change Sentence Order

 

Delete Repetitions & Off-Topic Sentences

 

Order Information

 

Add Dialogue

 

Precise Transitions

 

Read Aloud to Self

 

Author’s Chair

 

Peer Revising (Individual or Group)

 

Revising Checklist

 

Word Lists

 

Thesaurus

 

Teacher Conference

 

Capitals

 

End Marks

 

Commas

(Dates, Series, Phrases, Appositives)

 

Quotation Marks

 

Apostrophe

 

Subject/Verb Agreement

 

Sentence Structure (Fragments & Run On Sentences)

 

Correct Use of:

Possessives

Pronoun Reference

Adjectives/Adverbs

Verbs-Tense & Irregular

 

Personal Word Lists

 

Editing Checklists

 

Peer Editing

 

Proofreading Marks

 

Colored Pencils

 

Have a Go Spelling

 

Resident Expert: Spelling, Capitals, Punctuation, Grammar

 

Dictionary/

Thesaurus

 

Journal Entry

 

Essay

 

Typed Format

 

Book Format

 

Share/Read Aloud

 

Illustration

 

Diorama

 

Letter

 

Oral Report

 

Anthology

 

Magazine Article

 

New Article

 

 

 

 

Document A


 

Chicopee Public Schools   Grade 4 Writing Scope & Sequence   By Terms  
                 
Grade Standard Text Structures Prewriting Strategies Revising Skills Revising Tools Editing Skills Editing Tools Publishing
First  Respond to a Prompt Journal Response Sense of Audience Interesting Opening  Read Aloud to Self Capitals Personal Word Lists Journal Entry
Term     Journal Response     with Voice Discussion Precise Word Choice Author's Chair End Marks Editing Checklists Essay
      with Voice Descriptive Paragraph  Brainstorming List Descriptive/Sensory Words Peer Revising Quotation Marks Peer Editing Typed Format
  5 Paragraphs Essay: Personal Narrative  Quick Writes Combine Sentences  (Individual or Group) Apostrophe Proofreading Marks Book Format
        Introduction, 3 Open Response Essay Webbing Add Supporting Details  Revising Checklist Sentence Structure Colored Pencils Share/ Read Aloud
     support paragraphs     with Supporting Evidence Story Map Add Variety of  Examples Word Lists    (Fragments &  Have a Go Spelling Illustration
     & Conclusion Friendly Letter (Review) Sequence Chart Delete Repetitions & Thesaurus    Run On Sentences) Resident Expert Diorama
  (Paragraphs to be   Time Line     Off-Topic Sentences Teacher Conference   (Spelling, Capitals, Letter
          a Minimum of 5    Venn Diagram Precise Transitions     Punctuation, Oral Report
       Sentences and 3   KWL Chart       Grammar) Anthology
      Supporting Details)   Graphic Organizers -       Dictionary/Thesaurus Magazine Article
  Main Idea is Well        Main Idea & Detail         News Article
       Developed with               
        Supporting Evidence              
  All Sentences on              
      Topic              
  Evidence of Voice/              
     Writers Purpose              
Second Respond to a Prompt Open Response Essay Sense of Audience Interesting Opening  Read Aloud to Self Capitals Personal Word Lists Journal Entry
Term     Journal Response     with Supporting Evidence Discussion    Introductory Phrases Author's Chair End Marks Editing Checklists Essay
      with Voice Summary/Paraphrasing  Brainstorming List Precise Word Choice Peer Revising Commas    (Dates, Peer Editing Typed Format
  5 Paragraphs Essay:       Paragraph Quick Writes Descriptive/Sensory Words (Individual or Group)    Series, Phrases, Proofreading Marks Book Format
        Introduction, 3 Narrative Story - Plot Webbing Figurative Language - Revising Checklist    Appositives) Colored Pencils Share/ Read Aloud
     support paragraphs      Character,  Setting Story Map     simile, alliteration Word Lists Quotation Marks Have a Go Spelling Illustration
     & Conclusion Expository  Writing -  Sequence Chart Add Supporting Details  Thesaurus Apostrophe Resident Expert Diorama
  (Paragraphs to be    Comparative Time Line Add Variety of  Examples Teacher Conference Subject /Verb Agree (Spelling, Capitals, Letter
          a Minimum of 5  Poetry - Simple sense of detail Venn Diagram Sentence Variety    Sentence Structure Punctuation, Oral Report
       Sentences and 3 Persuasive Essay - KWL Chart Combine Sentences       (Fragments &  Grammar) Anthology
      Supporting Details)    with Goals/Reasons Graphic Organizers - Change Sentence Order      Run On Sentences) Dictionary/Thesaurus Magazine Article
  Main Idea is Well        Main Idea & Detail Delete Repetitions &   Correct Use of:   News Article
       Developed with    Outline-     Off-Topic Sentences         Possessives    
        Supporting Evidence   (Topic/Subtopic/Fact/ Order Information        Verbs -Tense & Irregular    
  All Sentences on   Detail) Add Dialogue        
      Topic     Precise Transitions        
  Evidence of Voice/              
     Writers Purpose              
                 
Third  Respond to a Prompt Expository  Writing -  Sense of Audience Interesting Opening  Read Aloud to Self Capitals Personal Word Lists Journal Entry
Term     Journal Response     Informational, Discussion     Introductory Phrases Author's Chair End Marks Editing Checklists Essay
      with Voice     Problem/Solution Brainstorming List Precise Word Choice Peer Revising Commas    (Dates, Peer Editing Typed Format
  5 Paragraphs Essay: Research Report Quick Writes Descriptive/Sensory Words (Individual or Group)    Series, Phrases, Proofreading Marks Book Format
        Introduction, 3   Webbing Figurative Language - Revising Checklist    Appositives) Colored Pencils Share/ Read Aloud
     support paragraphs   Story Map     simile, alliteration Word Lists Quotation Marks Have a Go Spelling Illustration
     & Conclusion   Sequence Chart Add Supporting Details  Thesaurus Apostrophe Resident Expert Diorama
  (Paragraphs to be   Time Line Add Variety of  Examples Teacher Conference Subject /Verb Agree (Spelling, Capitals, Letter
          a Minimum of 5    Venn Diagram Sentence Variety    Sentence Structure Punctuation, Oral Report
       Sentences and 3   KWL Chart Combine Sentences -      (Fragments &  Grammar) Anthology
      Supporting Details)   Graphic Organizers -     Use of Introductory      Run On Sentences) Dictionary/Thesaurus Magazine Article
  Main Idea is Well        Main Idea & Detail     Phrases   Correct Use of:   News Article
       Developed with    Outline- Change Sentence Order         Possessives    
        Supporting Evidence   (Topic/Subtopic/Fact/ Delete Repetitions &         Pronoun Reference    
  All Sentences on   Detail)     Off-Topic Sentences         Adjectives & Adverbs    
      Topic     Order Information          Verbs -Tense & Irregular    
  Evidence of Voice/     Add Dialogue        
     Writers Purpose     Precise Transitions        

 

 

Chicopee Public Schools

Grade 4 Writing Rubric


Document B
 

Elements of Writing

Topic Development

Organization

Sentence Structure

Vocabulary

Conventions

Grammar/Mechanics

 

* Exemplary

 

4

 

  Topic is creatively stated

  Well-developed and thoughtful paragraphs enhance topic

  Wide variety of supporting details with examples

  Purposeful use of paragraphing

  Complex organizational structure

  Sophisticated use of transitions enhances writer’s purpose

  Sentence structure contributes to voice and tone

  Sentences are purposefully chosen for effect

  Thoughtful word choice enhances writer’s purpose

  Creative use of sensory words and/or figurative language contributes to voice or tone

  Use of conventions enhances writer’s purpose

  Spelling errors show evidence of risk-taking

  Sophisticated use of tense

* Exemplary writing must represent independent writing.  All standards for proficient writing must be met in addition to the exemplary standards.  

 

Proficient

 

3

 

  Topic is clearly stated and well developed

  All sentences are on topic

  Adequate number and choice of details support the topic

 

  Five paragraphs with precise and engaging introduction, body and conclusion

  Ideas are logical and sequential

  Individual paragraphs are well organized to convey writer’s purpose

  Precise use of transitions

  Evidence of compound and/or complex sentences

  Sentences vary in type and length

 

  Precise and varied word choice supports writer’s purpose

  Effective use of sensory words and figurative language 

 

  Correct use of capitalization and punctuation

  Grade level words are spelled correctly

  Correct use of subject/verb agreement and verb tenses

  Correct pronoun reference,  plurals and possessives

 

Developing

 

2

 

  Topic is not clearly stated and/or well developed

  Most sentences are on topic

  Limited number of details to support topic

 

  Unclear or incomplete  introduction, body, and conclusion

  Some ideas are logical and sequential

  Individual paragraphs do not effectively convey writer’s purpose

  Limited use of transitions

  Limited use of compound and/or complex sentences

  Lacks sentence variety

  Some variety of word choice

  Word choice does not adequately support topic

  Occasional use of sensory words and/or figurative language

  Some errors in capitalization and punctuation

  Occasional errors in spelling grade level words

  Inconsistent use of subject/verb agreement and verb tense

  Inconsistent use of pronoun reference, plurals and possessives

 

Beginning

 

1

 

  Topic is not stated and/or developed

  Few sentences are on topic

  Inadequate number of details and examples to support topic

  Inadequate introduction, body, and conclusion

  Ideas are not logical or sequential

  Writer’s purpose is unclear

  No sentence variety

  Uses incomplete and/or run on sentences

  Basic and/or repetitive word choice

  Word choice does not support topic

  Lacks use of sensory words and/or figurative language

  Numerous errors in capitalization, punctuation

  Spelling errors interfere with meaning

  Frequent errors using parts of speech

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